So After thumb nailing I move on to fleshing out the sketch more and trying to solidify the composition and elements with in the sketch.

After I got a ways on this I was happy with where all the ‘actors’ were and the action was going but it was still stale and even though there was a lot going on I was satisfied with it, it looks more like looking down at a DnD tactics board then an illustration (not that there is anything wrong with that haha like i said I do like it).

SO! I decided the solution was to move the camera down and tilt it slightly to unbalance the action. I also like the centered/mirrored part of the illustration in contrast to the of kilter action below. This stage is still a major work in process as I’m still lose and just trying to explore my options to get everything where I want it to be, or to look good and flow well.